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My first images here

New Here ,
Apr 15, 2017 Apr 15, 2017

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Hello everyone, my name is jorge, I´m from Argentina and these are some images I intend to upload here. Can you tell what you think of them. These are not edited yet. Any respectful comments are welcome. Thank you in advance.APH_0867.jpg

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Apr 16, 2017 Apr 16, 2017

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I like the lighting. The quality of the image is nice too. The compositions aren't that great though. Look into the "rule of thirds". Your heads are dead center in both images and it feels really wrong. See these images: https://www.google.com/search?q=rule+of+thirds+portraits&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiowsT8...

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Apr 16, 2017 Apr 16, 2017

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Thank you so much for your time Szalam. I will take that in consideration. 

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Apr 17, 2017 Apr 17, 2017

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Try to frame the image, see what happens. I would like to see the girl not in the center, but on the right. Color and lighting, the idea is very good.

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Apr 17, 2017 Apr 17, 2017

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Thank you for your reply. I have other images with models on the sides of the frame, so I guess I´ll choose one of them to edit. Have a nice day.

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